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06/22/06
This is stunning. You have exposed this woman's soul. I'm tremendously impressed! Love the free-flowing format; it was absolutely perfect for the mood of this piece.
06/23/06
This is a fantastic piece of work! I love it.
06/26/06
Magnificent. I love the way you've used language, not worrying about subjects and objects but getting to the raw beauty of the words. Indeed, you've given us a great peek into a slice of life for this woman. Well done.
Breathtaking artistry! What marvelous imagery--"The moon drowns on its endless course around the earth." You took me into her world, and made me forget I was reading. I could smell the ocean, see the forlorn eye of the old dog...You left me reverberating with her desperate cry...A literary treasure, going straight into my favorites.
06/26/06
Oh Yeggs, this is beautiful. As we read, we experience the essence of this piece - and the hope of God's mercy.

See you in a few weeks dear friend.
Yeggy, there is not a word that can descibe this poem. A favorite for sure.

Blessings,
Trina
06/30/06
I fear my comments are not enough, after reading such a pure experience. I felt it all, I knew it all. The depth of your heart did not surprise me in the least. You are a gift and I'm so grateful... Much love, Val