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By Purity Snowe
06/15/06 -
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Behind me
She was putting on makeup
In traffic on the 405
The hood of her Lexus glinted in the afternoon sun
Bright as her teeth
Her smile
She was putting on makeup on the interstate
Oblivious to the riches that surrounded
Unaware of the abundance that sought her
I saw her in the rearview mirror
Behind me
She was talking on her cell phone
In traffic on the 405
Her eyes rolled as she laughed behind molded glass
A pantomime on TV
Distant
She was talking on her cell phone on the interstate
Oblivious to the people that surrounded
Unaware of the prayers that interceded for her
I saw her in the rearview mirror
Behind me
She was twisting the ends of bleached hair
In traffic on the 405
She was beautiful, stunning, perfection
An earthly goddess
Angelic
She was twisting bleached hair on the interstate
Oblivious to the creation that surrounded
Unaware of heaven that longed for her
I saw her in the rearview mirror
She seemed lost
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Unaware of....
Beautiful.
What a marvelous phrase! I'll be thinking about that all day.
Enough about that...your poem as always...AWESOME