The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you precious one. This story ministered to me in such an intimate, deep way that I'm unable to articulate the specifics. I am sitting at my keyboard weeping with joy as I write this. Truly I've heard the Teacher's voice through you. And by the way, I'm taking a lunch break.
02/16/06
Really creative--I don't think I've ever read a story from this little guy's POV before. Nicely done.
02/16/06
"He's just a normal man" was one line that stood out to me. Jesus probably looked like 'everyone else' - good POV from the boy's perspective. Thanks for writing.
02/16/06
Very nicely done - flows well. You expressed the boy's motivation very well - I want to see a miracle.
02/16/06
This is a wonderful retelling of a very familiar story. Telling it from the boy's POV made the story even more poignant because he was young. This would make a wonderful short piece for a children's Christian magazine. What an incredible lesson for all of us.
awesome job on creativity! I enjoyed seeing that little guy's perspective.
02/16/06
Nice retelling of a classic story. It brought a new perspective to the telling ... and the message. Good job!