The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1190 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/16/06
What a wonderful piece! Your parallel structure is perfect, and your word choice impeccable. Powerful analogy!
02/16/06
What a brilliant parallel! This is fabulous all the way through.

I had a bit of difficulty (pun intended) because I wasn't familiar with all the terms, and wasn't sure at first what was going on. But I did figure it out and got used to the terminology - and everything fell into place beautifully. Great job!
02/16/06
Wow... this was really great writing. I was a little concerned because I thought it was going to be a conversation with God type thing (hard to pull those off) but instead you put together a very strong analogy. Excellent work.
02/17/06
Where are all of the comments on this piece? Wonderfully creative and well crafted, flowed smoothly, excellent correlation to our relationship with The Master. This one touched me deeply. Loved every word.
02/17/06
Very cool -an excellent comparison. I could see it all unfolding.
I was wondering too where all the comments are on this?!?

Wow, Ann! You did a masterful job of this! VERY well written. I enjoyed every word!