The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
Such a wonderful job with describing how humble, and gentle the Holy Spirit is. Yet powerful in all its meaning. I really liked the creative flow and the clever way you applied the topic.

Thanks. God bless~
This is a powerful piece. I enjoy the play on words. Certainly the Role of the Spirit will roll. The line about liking oneself before being able to do miracles or good things resonated with me. Nice job
05/18/12
Very cleverly written and a piece that caused this reader to appreciate what is offered by the Holy Spirit.
05/19/12
This was thought provoking and I enjoyed the challenging thoughts I was presented in reading it.
05/21/12
This felt fresh to me. I loved it, especially the concept that the Holy Spirit doesn't need fame for power, but Fame needs power...Loved that!

I found the whole thing intriguing, and a delicious treat. My only comment is that in the last paragraph, I couldn't understand how the first two sentences fit in. It felt like a separate topic to me.

However, fantastic job overall. I like the way you think.
05/22/12
Stirring and thought provoking. A great take on this week's topic. Good job! God bless!