The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/11
Awww, this is absolutely beautiful! To me it had everything, from wondering who or what Simi was, to being there with you in that amazing garden which you described in such detail - and just as I thought the garden was going on too long and was all the story was going to be about, you brought it to a poignant and unexpected ending with the reunion.

Very well done!
09/09/11
Beautiful! God Bless~
09/09/11
Having children of our own can absolutely persuade us real fast to see things differently! LOL This was a sweet story with lots of vivid detail to make it come alive! Enjoyed!
This is beautiful. The descriptions of the garden were lovely. For me personally, I would have prefered more character development but I know that's more my taste. This is well written and your certainly painted an outstanding picture.
09/11/11
This is a magical story filled with vivid garden descriptions and a tender reunion of father and daughter...i liked the atmosphere you created!