The Official Writing Challenge
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Bravo!!! I have been taking notes on this topic for years and tried to find a way to work it right. This was marvelous. The ending was masterful. A great work I truly enjoyed. Thank you.
Wow! You did an amazing job of leading up to the glorious ending!!! It brought a tear to my eye and is going in my favorites.
02/11/11
This is great. I love how you turned his disappointment into a story of hope with a perfect ending.
02/12/11
A wonderful take on the story of Moses. God blessed him with a chance to see the promised land, but more importantly to walk with him eternally,
02/17/11
Wonderful! I too absolutely loved the ending! Inspired!
Perfect. So imaginative, yet it rang completely true. You carried it all the way through the ending. This story is one of my favorites. Great job.
02/17/11
So well done! I'm glad the EC list brought this to my attention. Excellent, and congratulations!
I was hoping this would place. I like it straight away. Congrats on EC!
02/18/11
Congratulations on your placing with these vivid descriptions and thoughts of Moses last earthly hours. Challenging stuff!