The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/10
Very deep! This story will stay with me.
11/06/10
I began to think this was a few simple words telling a fairly common tale, but recognized early on that this was profound truths in the guise of simplicity. Very well done!
The clever names clued me in fairly early on which made it a delight to read. Well done.
11/08/10
Interesting and entertaining as the twist on the topic is revealed towards the end.
Today is a windy one in my neighborhood and many leaves are lying on the ground now.
11/10/10
Your title grabbed my attention because one of my previous Challenge stories had the same title. :)

I liked your subtle reference to Scripture in Gabriella Green's comment about the sun shining and rain falling on the good and the bad.

The ending was a bit intense, but the point was well made.

Great twist on the gossip topic!