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This story had me wondering what would happen when he returned home. There was definitely an array of emotions in this story. It's difficult to read only because I know right at this second there is a woman or a child being physically abused. it breaks my heart, but perhaps there is hope.
09/05/10
Very on topic, and filled with feelings that indeed need control. Good job.
09/08/10
I'm glad you ended with hope for the husband. But many times it is just a false repentance. It really is best for the wife to leave and then send help for him. Returning may come after intense heartfelt work on husbans part.
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