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I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, I found myself holding my breath. I don't know much about rodeos but I could still easily envision the scene you described. I especially enjoyed the ending!
This was great! You gave your MC something to want, something to fear, and then let us have it. I never expected that ending. Great job!
And don't you just love all the strange names they give bulls? ;) I do.
A real nail-biter. Thanks!
Perfect title! Wow! You've captured the emotion and drama of a rodeo. I could see each move of the animal and the rider. I loved the ending!
First of all, a cowboy story...nice. Pretty much destined to not fail. But the suspense and build up was very well-played with an ending that made me sigh with relief. Great job!
I love watching the cowboys ride the bulls and you were spot on! Congratulations!
Virgil, I'm going to feature this story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 22. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page--and congratulations!
I am terrified of bulls.

My Dad raised cattle when I was growing up and I had a close call when my dog startled one of his bulls.

This was a great story and kept me on the edge of my seat!