The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooooh, yes! Beautiful. The scene only lasted a few minutes but the message is timeless and unending. And you presented it so wonderfully well and authentically. Great job!
08/12/10
Ditto!
08/12/10
Me and probably a million women can relate to this story. I'm familiar with Gary Chapman's book--lots of insight for married couples. Loved the tender way your MC's husband acknowledged her needs. Good job!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.
This is a touching message. I really could relate to the wife. It's hard sometimes to put into words what I really need.