The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome descriptions.
Great story, have 2 nitpicky things..The sun's Glared muted and cooled...Maybe the sun's glare, muted and cooled? Then;
Footfalls of visitors as himself over the years. Some of this is unneeded maybe?
I've nver been woven into a story so masterfully as this one. In the middle there as he was going to the Littleton estate, I thought he was making an adventure out of a routine house call. The way it ended was just as good. Liked it.
Too fun! I know that feeling all too well. Loved the descriptions here!
Excellent mastery of words. And since it is a piece on LIBRARY, couldn't have picked better wording. I got carried away into the story, and just like the old fellow, who got lost in his story, I too got lost for awhile...Very, very excellent handling of words...A masterpiece...Helen