The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
One of the best "birthing" stories I've ever read. This shines.
08/29/09
Awesome writing.
08/30/09
Terrific! You truly tell this story with mastery.
08/31/09
Spectacular writing on this piece! Absolutely riveting with the detail and setting. Very creative interpretation.
Pat Guy  
08/31/09
I so want to write like you when I grow up. Amazing work.
08/31/09
I agree. This is just riveting. I think I didn't catch my breath until the last line. Powerfully engaging, suspenseful, and the dialogue is terrific. All I want to know is how you know so much about this subject in that time period?

Mona
09/01/09
Awesome entry. Wonderful dialogue and you built suspense incredibly. Well done.
09/01/09
Woderfully told all the way through. You've written a winner, I think.
09/02/09
Wonderful! I love the 'knot' motif. This was a pleasure to read!
09/02/09
Fine writing.Gripping view of another culture and birthing methods.