The Official Writing Challenge
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One of the best "birthing" stories I've ever read. This shines.
08/29/09
Awesome writing.
08/30/09
Terrific! You truly tell this story with mastery.
08/31/09
Spectacular writing on this piece! Absolutely riveting with the detail and setting. Very creative interpretation.
08/31/09
I so want to write like you when I grow up. Amazing work.
08/31/09
I agree. This is just riveting. I think I didn't catch my breath until the last line. Powerfully engaging, suspenseful, and the dialogue is terrific. All I want to know is how you know so much about this subject in that time period?

Mona
Awesome entry. Wonderful dialogue and you built suspense incredibly. Well done.
Woderfully told all the way through. You've written a winner, I think.
09/02/09
Wonderful! I love the 'knot' motif. This was a pleasure to read!
09/02/09
Fine writing.Gripping view of another culture and birthing methods.