The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 482 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Oh! That's how I hear from God, sometimes too! While writing in a journal.
I got a little confused on just which one was Sandi. The girl that had fallen was initially called Sandi, then she decided that Sandi was right and her name became Coral. You kept her real, though, and I liked her!
Isn't it great when others step-up and surprise us with their abilities. I liked the ending and the reminder that God often speaks in quite times.
08/26/09
Really enjoyed this interesting story - very good entry for this topic - Well done! Colin
08/26/09
Boy, I get lessons in humility pretty often. Good take on the subject.

Mona