The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/09
I liked the wintertime images in this. :)
09/06/09
Ah! This was SO picturesque! It reminded me in rhythm--a bit--of the poem, "'Twas the Night Before Christmas," always a favourite of mine...In this poem you had all the elements of a snug, warm evening by the fire. It gives the feeling of Christmas--and winter, of course. Your words were so descriptive. It makes the reader able to hear the crackle of the fire and the crunch of the nuts being cracked. I loved the picture of the children, snug in their warm winter atire, listening wide-eyed to the stories their elders told...Well done! (Thanks for your comment on my Autumn poem)...Helen