The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice. Good tempo and great descriptions.
Yes, good flow! Watch out for stray quotation marks, there is one at the very end.
I can relate to the frustrations of moving and making new friends and adjusting to 'strange' climate changes. Good job depicting that!
Funny how an attitude adjustment can help us see things in a more positive light. That's the message I gathered from this story. Good job.