The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
Nice. Good tempo and great descriptions.
Yes, good flow! Watch out for stray quotation marks, there is one at the very end.
I can relate to the frustrations of moving and making new friends and adjusting to 'strange' climate changes. Good job depicting that!
08/21/09
Funny how an attitude adjustment can help us see things in a more positive light. That's the message I gathered from this story. Good job.