The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
Cute story, what a fun memory. Reminded me of my own fascination with a pair of rubber boots from my childhood. Written with just the right touch of humor.
08/21/09
This was cute and sweet. I remember one winter birthday wishing for red boots.
A couple of suggestions: spaces between your paragraphs for an easier read, and proof read several times--yep, a couple of spelling errors--I hate when that happens.
Very engaging story. Nice descriptive phrases. I also recommend use of spell-check & proof-reading. :-)