The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
Delightful! I almost felt like I was a bird!

Pam Ford Davis
How cute! I like the way he was real and flawed, just like us. And the use of repitition was just right. I liked it!
08/21/09
Excellent! I could just see Carl and Carla (and my husband and I) discussing the move. Carl demonstrated our very human tendencies. Glad he survived.