The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
One word: WOW! I was truly captivated by the story-telling. Excellent entry, with a creative angle on "anger".
Blessings, Lynda
01/31/05
I agree. Wow! Very captivating writing. I really enjoyed this. I could really picture everything.
Very nice job. God bless you.
02/02/05
Well done. Good story, and very relevant.
Thanks for bringing a part of history alive to me. Your story was gripping and we must ever be thankful for the rescue of those who suffered at the hands of the Germans.
02/02/05
Beautifully written! Outstanding ability to paint a word picture. I'll be thinking about this for a long time.
02/03/05
Awesome and beautiful story writing. We should never forget the atrocities of the Holocaust. God's blessings on you.
03/03/05
A terrific submission. As usual, you paint increibly vivid word pictures. Probably didn't rate out as well in the final results becuase it sort of hits the topic tangentially rather than squarely.

Still, a very strong submission, well worth reading. Good work.
This is great work. Feels like a spark for a longer work to me.