The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
This is lovely. The images are so rich and the message so clear. Beautiful.
The excellent structure and repetition in this thoughtful free verse sweep the reader through a lifetime in the blink of an eye.
A lifetime in a free-verse, clearly and beautifully told.
Congratulations on recognition for this lovely little masterpiece.
Life is a series of bridges from birth to death; how beautifully told here. Congratulations!
08/14/08
The recurring lines are very powerful, and when the hand is Jesus' hand, it's just wonderful.