The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/08
Very imaginative & humorous. I didn't quite get the Matthew connection, but perhaps it's the wrong reference? Anyway, a very interesting read.
08/12/08
A very enjoyable story. Good descriptions. Nicely done.
08/13/08
HAHA... great twist on an old story! I thoroughly enjoyed this fun entry.
Wonderful up-dating of "The Three Billy Goats Gruff". With the related scripture references, this would be a delightful older children's lesson. You did a great job combining just the right amount of "gore" with the right amount of humor. Loved it! :)