The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/08
Such a visual piece - haunting yet full of hope. I was transformed and transported. Wonderful.
06/14/08
I thought this story was fantastic. I got caught up her story, felt betrayed when she was, kept cheering for her until the end. So glad there was a happy reunion.
A wonderful story Deb, full of all the good things that make a fine story. Pain, regret, betrayal, hope and love. Well done.
06/16/08
This needs to be a book, Debbie! What a wonderful story!
The test of a true family... welcoming home the prodigal child. You wrote this so well, and kept me engaged to the end. Excellent.
06/16/08
So sad..so beautiful... at the same time.
Well written.
Debbie, this was a very powerful and moving story.Living here in SA I could so identify with the story.I can see your stay here left a deep impression upon you. Bless you,
Norms
Wow, this was really good. A different take on the family reunion and a reality, sadly, in many countries. Well-written and kept me reading from start to finish.
What a beautiful and tender story, told exceedingly well! Kudos!
06/21/08
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.