The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
Fun story! Didn't see that ending coming!
I liked your MC's silver lining lots better than his Uncle Joe. You did a good job at building up suspense in your story.
03/11/08
Good writing, good form but the story made no sense, but maybe I'm just not getting it. Good job on the writing though.