The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/08
I loved your comparisons in the first few paragraphs! Loved the humor and how you gave a great message at the end:) Good voice throughout. Only suggestion(there had to be ..:) break up the last paragraph somewhat for more readability and power in the words! GREAT STORY!
What a tale. Loved this line "As I lay helplessly on Satanís noisy freeway, revelations from the Holy Spirit began to come. "
Keep up the good words.
03/07/08
HAHA! Love the AWOL comparison... and this line "So shut up Satan. Jesus just gave me control of the remote."
I was drawn in right away to your story because I've gone the bad back route--just had surgery this January 25th. I recognized the pitchfork and suffered with you. (After three and a half weeks of unbeleivable pain and the awful pain meds, I began to feel the positive effects of answered prayer.)

Then your last paragraph is such a wonderful comfort to all believers. I wondered if you're a preacher. If not, you're a believer grounded in the Word. Just that paragraph alone would make an excellent devotion.