The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/07
I can't tell you how much I love this poem! What a masterpiece of onomatopoeia and pacing! Love it, love it, love it!
09/20/07
Top notch writing. Congratulations. (P.S. are you working a publishing a new dictionary?)
Fun to read, but packed with truth as well. I felt the noise and confusion as I read.
09/21/07
Read the poem a second time, got rid of the junk, read between the lines, and voila, a cool message in there! Clever and smart poetry, as well as entertaining.
09/22/07
Amazingly creative and thought-provoking. I don't know what else to say. Wow.
Loved the word-ities and the code between the lines.