The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
An excellent retelling of Bible stories. The enjoyed this lyrical rendering.
06/01/07
A WOW of a poem!
06/04/07
A wonderfully rhythmic poem, with an insistent heart-beat which builds the tension to the crescendo, then issues the challange to us all! Amazing.

Margaret Darbinean, UK
06/05/07
This is great. I love the different stories interwoven here. The ryhthm of this is just right, excellent job.
06/06/07
I enjoyed this very much - it flowed just right, and the message came across wonderfully in the phrasing. Excellent.