The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
Such a vivid rendering!
05/31/07
Such a vivid rendering!
05/31/07
A familiar story brought vividly to life for a contemporary reader. So very well written!
06/04/07
Very nice retelling of this well-known Bible story! I especially liked the description of the women's prayer meeting and the lines "Around the room, voices began to ebb and flow in and around Mary’s melodic heart cry. The atmosphere thickened as each breath intertwined with that of another, until the room became one heart, one mind; one song." One time in particular I was in a prayer group where we experienced this very thing. Good job! :)
06/04/07
This was nicely done, very compelling.
06/08/07
Birdie, as a judge, you got high marks from me on this one. Great piece of writing!
06/09/07
Bravo.