The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
You packed alot into 750 words! Enjoyed the read!
This is a thriller... you had me hooked.
I know you were probably out of words, but I was wondering why they got the illegal weapons in the first place...
I enjoyed the read!
What an adventure! Scary.
06/01/07
Great action! Moved along so well! A question about the POV shifting from both but done well:) A few errors here and there to clean up but after doing that - it will be even a better story!Thanks!
06/08/07
Nathan, this was very well written. As a judge, the only categories where I found it hard to give high marks was your opening (it was a little confusing and it took a while to figure out) and the point of the story, but you did great in all the other areas and I really enjoyed it :)