The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
I have chills, I can almost see their awe. Great detail and strong writing!
05/21/07
Ooooh, very nice! I should have seen the "remnant" bit coming, but I didn't. Well done!

Some "narration" near the middle stalls the pace a bit, but otherwise, a really good read.
05/21/07
Such strong writing and so visually realistic. I loved all the "authentic" names. Your ending is wonderful.
05/23/07
Wonderfully crafted! Love the ending!
A great sci-fi story with a great message!
05/23/07
Neat! I loved that they had found what they were looking for and that their response was worship. Good!
05/23/07
Kept my interest throughout. Good job. God bless.