The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story! Excellent descriptive writing. I was surprised and delighted by the ending. Super nice work!
Wow, this is good...intense. I loved the ending - almost spooky. Hope this does well in the challenge, probably the best I have read today.
This is exactly what I think of when I think of the Sci Fi genre. Great piece!
What a fascinating concept--and I love the last sentence!
Very good!! The paragraphs about the war scene in the cave were especially vivid--you put us in there too. :-)
Great description - and your title is perfect! I was completely engaged from the first word to the last.
This kept my attention all the way through. Powerful ending, too. Well done.
"I like the "echoes" concept you wove into this tale. Very creative and intriguing. Keep up the good work!
Perfectly written from the title to the ending!
Earth echoes--what a creative and interesting concept! An excellent story!
Intrigued by the entire concept and you made me believe, hey, this just might be possible. Isn't that what great sci-fi writing is all about - suspending believe and making it seem real.

Great Job!
Very interesting and thoroughly riveting! I really enoyed reading this, everything just came alive. Excellent writing, friend! ^_^
Yes! This was great! I loved it and the concept! Wow! I hope it does well also. Very, very good!
Super idea and execution. Great writing. God bless.
This is supurb writing on a haunting topic: echoes of earth. This reader could get lost in the world you invented here with your vivid descriptions seen through the eyes and heart of your MC. God has not left Himself without witness---and He has His way of getting everyone's attention somehow! Even in a sci-fi world :)
I'm glad I came looking for you to thank you for your comment on my story. I appreciate you!
I am WOWed! I love the bridge you create between sci-fi and God's creation. The earth, the universe, the galaxies, and their habitats are God's science. Excellent story. Thank you for being an inspiration.