The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/06
Loved it! One goof-up right off the bat spoiled it for a time, ("or" not are)...but then it grew on me; the dog, the boy, the writing, the Dad, and turned out to be an excellent story with a great message. Written well. Super job. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks!
09/16/06
I really enjoyed this - a lovely message and great characterization - especially of the boy. I kinda thought the boy's mind change was a bit quick, but that may have just been me. I truly enjoyed this piece!
09/16/06
Nice story! A couple glitched right from the start but otherwise well done. I love the picture of the boy and his daddy working together. I always knew dogs could smile! :) Very nice!