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09/16/06
Nicely written. I too, remember that night as I read your story; Jesus disciples may have slept from being weary back then - but today we sleep in peace and hope because of what transpired that night. Jesus followed through with the Plan of Salvation - and won us our pardon. Thank you for this story. Well done.
09/16/06
Very nice! My favorite line: "I now realize He wasn’t praying for deliverance from the ordeal of the cross. He was asking the Father to help Him live long enough to endure the cross for me!" I love the way you ended this. Well done! :)