The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/05
I loved this line -the market for pond scum was rather…stagnant
03/16/05
Very creative and with a serious message.
The names are great! I love The Leggo Construction Co. I think they have done quite a lot of building at my house :0)~L~
03/17/05
veru clever story - shrewd use of names and puns and stuff. I liked the last line very much!
03/18/05
Man, that's so full of insight it's scarey. Sadly it's also so true it breaks my heart. You did a great job.
This just reminds me of the battles so many churches get in and say it's all in God's name. An excellent story and I wasn't sure about that ending. It seemed something gave him a vision of where he was headed and I didn't feel it; I just had to read it. I would have liked to have "felt it" too.