The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Gave me the creeps! I guess that's what it was supposed to do. Nice job, not so nice character.(: What was the name of that stuff again.hahah (Only kidding)(:
03/14/05
This WAS creepy - and deliciously so! Great writing!
Blessings, Lynda
03/15/05
Yikes! Very well-written, his last lunch was nicely detailed. Loved the "kiss of death" on his cheek.
YIKES! Quite a fascinating, vivid and frightening tale you told. Great work.
03/15/05
Well written! I was hoping she would forget and take a sip too, but then there would never be a chance to repent. Nice to be reminded how shrewdness can go either way: good/evil. Good job. ~LG~
hmmm chilling read!
03/21/05
I guess your brew was too perfect for the challenge!!