The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/18
Amen!
Great message.
Blessings~
This fast paced poem is right on topic. The pacing matches the intensity of the piece. My only complaint is I've read several pieces like this that lists red things, but you added your touch and voice to make it stand out. You created a wonderful mental picture.
Fasting moving, on topic. Good message. Thank you.
God bless.
Fun poem!
02/12/18
Wow. So many examples of the topic all in one fun poem. And ending with the greatest red of all. I really enjoyed it.