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Love the way you left us guessing. We have seen what we need to see, and the incidentals of her eventual rescue are not pertinent. Told with restraint. Good job
This is excellent; I really liked hearing her inner dialog, first about the scene at the hospital, and then in her predicament. Would you consider another title? That one's almost a cliche...and this wonderful story deserves a title with pizzazz. Very, very good.
Very nice. ^_^
"A calm came over her as she kept her eyes on the cross."

Love this line.

A well written entry.

No fair! :( I need to know what happened! Give me closure! The man of her dreams comes and rescues her right?

What a great story! You did a fantastic job on this!

Hey! Part two next week for the 'Love' topic. Okay?
Oh, a truly wonderful story! You told it so realistically, pulled me right in! Thank you!