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01/23/06
A beautiful way to express and expound on your Wish List = Starting Today! Very nice!
01/23/06
Interesting approach to the topic. I like it.
01/24/06
Is it a poem or just like the reviewer said a wish list? The sentiment is good though.
01/24/06
You definitely have a gift for words--but I'm puzzled by your resolve to start some very important things "next week" or "next month." But I really like the rise and fall of this piece--it's peaceful, somehow.
This is like a New Year's resolution. I like the way you came to the realization that what you were putting off for next week or next month or tomorrow can be implemented right now and that's very good.
What a very creative way to explain how our current world lives -- procrastinating on what needs to be done today. I think your work greatly expresses the lives for most people in today's society.