The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
Immensely moving and so beautifully done with such a talented weaving of words! I loved it, and feel compelled to read it again and again! A lovely piece of art that pierces deep into the inner soul of Man. Kudos!
Beautiful imagery, I was captivated by it all!
01/24/06
Very lyrical, almost poetic. Thanks so much.
01/25/06
Beautiful, poetic, artistic.
Like an old masters canvass - vibrant, startling, beautiful.
God bless.
WOW -- That is one word I would use to express your writing. The illustrative words helped me picture everything to feel the emotion you were portraying.
01/27/06
Well done, though I would question your use of the word 'Troubadour' to describe Christ. According to Webster, a troubadour is "a class of lyric poets and poet-musicians often of the knightly rank…whose major theme was courty love". I can see the point, but there probably is a more accurate word .
actually Max Lucado referred to Jesus as a troubador in one of his books...