The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Very nice. Especialluy liked the line "as though the very hand of the Almighty touched his face" Excellent wriitng and description.
09/13/05
It's tricky to re-write Bible stories, but you've done a very good job of tapping into Joseph's emotions.
09/16/05
A compassionate and unique look at Joseph. You really got under his skin, revealing the possibiliteis of what he might have thought/felt. Great work. Yeggy
I enjoyed this very much, and would like to hear more of your story.
09/18/05
Very nicely done
Fantastic. Smart. An original take on the topic, I had not thought of using this story but it's perfect.
09/21/05
Deborah, I just wanted to stop by quickly and let you know that this story made it into the semi-finals for the Bon Voyage Challenge. It was very good and you deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)