The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow!...Powerful and well written. I only saw a few typos but this is a great story for people who are lost and struggling. Nice job.
09/13/05
Gripping and powerful...thank you for this wonderful writing.
09/13/05
Easy to read and about a place that many have been before. It's not exactally "hell" but life's tough and that's what this story was all about. You summed that up nicely and wrapped it up neatly :)