The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh how I loved this story. You don't need eyes to praise God. All you need is a heart to serve God and share His love with others. Thank you for such a tender story. Keep writing and God bless.
01/23/10
Love the title and the ending. Needs some work with formatting and maybe a little more proofing but overall a good job.
01/25/10
Like your character portrait of Leo but struggle to see how the theme ties in here.
01/26/10
Lovely title, and lovely story.

I'm not sure what the 'oops' tie-in is.

I've started a thread in the message boards specifically for Beginner and Intermediate writers, and I'd love to have you stop by. http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67

I hadn't heard that last song in a long time; thanks for reminding me!