The Official Writing Challenge
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I can only imagine how that young man felt when that happened. His heart was in his shoes. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story. Keep writing and God bless.
01/22/10
Very informative article with the "oops" implied. Nice writing.
01/24/10
Oh dear! Love how the title foreshadows in this story. Wonderful!
01/25/10
Great ending. Is this based upon a true story?
01/25/10
Simple, sweet story. I really enjoyed it!
01/26/10
Nostalgic and charming--I loved it.