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TITLE: Springs Unyielding Promise | Previous Challenge Entry
By Vickie Jordan
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Be careful of punctuation; for example, there should be an apostrophe in "Spring's" in your title. And if you hit "enter" an extra time between paragraphs, you'll put an extra whilte space between each one that will be easier on your readers' eyes.
Very well-done and hopeful.