The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
I love the way you incorporated the Scriptural lesson into the text of this devotional.

Be careful of punctuation; for example, there should be an apostrophe in "Spring's" in your title. And if you hit "enter" an extra time between paragraphs, you'll put an extra whilte space between each one that will be easier on your readers' eyes.

Very well-done and hopeful.
08/20/09
Beautifully written. I very much enjoyed reading this piece.
08/20/09
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.