The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
Stories of reconciliation always get to me. Thanks for writing this!
05/21/09
Just the right amount of conflict making your reader want answers. I enjoyed the details of the tire swing and flower pots. Great title, too.
05/26/09
Powerful and emotive writing, and a very important issue.

I felt you took a bit too long getting her to the door, and ran out of words to tell what was really going on between father and daughter. The basic story was there, but it would have been nice to have more detail in the second half.

The flowerpots was the perfect way to end this! Nice job.