The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
Great use of the topic words!

I think your first long paragraph could easily be broken down into several shorter ones. Be careful of switching from present tense to past tense and back again.

Thanks for shedding some light on Paul/Saul.
05/25/09
Very well crafted story on Paul's conversion. Thank you.