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04/09/09
Very moving, and a beautiful use of the topic.

The first paragraph, written in past tense, almost seemed to beling to a different piece.

I think this will be of great comfort to anyone in similar circumstances. Well done!
04/09/09
The pain of the author is here, but so is the hope of the Savior's love and comfort in the loss of a child or the many other difficult times life throws our way.
04/09/09
Very powerful and moving.
We are truly blessed to serve such an awesome, compassionate God.
04/13/09
Powerful piece on suffering that could speak to a broken heart and give hope.
04/14/09
Good piece. Sometimes we are up. Sometimes we are down. We pray God will take us up and keep us up always. Cheers!
04/16/09
Well done on your placing. It was a beautiful piece of writing.
04/16/09
Only someone who has walked in your shoes could write so eloquently from the depth of such pain. Your words have a poetic quality to them. Well done!
04/20/09
Thank you personally, for this piece. What you have said, I echo and confirm. As we give our grief over to the Comforter, He sustains us beyond what we can imagine; and inspires in such personal ways, as to allow us a special insight to the Glory to come. Such Hope enables me to continue to breathe and in turn have even more of a fervency for Eternity.
Congratulations on your first place win.