The Official Writing Challenge
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Heartwarming story. Keep them coming.
Powerful account. Beautifully written. Well done Ken.
Keep it up. Love Norms
02/29/08
Your descriptions are so vivid - I felt like I was right there. Very good.
02/29/08
Awesome testimony--this is an "Advanced" article! Matthew, Mark, Luke, John, Acts. . .
02/29/08
Very good job of establishing a "you are there" feeling.
Exfellent story. Just one question - how come Liso, as a tour guide, could neither speak nor understand English? I am originally from Natal, and am reasonably sure that both as a tour guide and later as a worker/waiter in an hotel, he would have known something of the lingua franca of the country. Gob bless you.
Thank you, Ken, for your very credible explanation. I agree, 750 words can be very limiting. This sounds like a small part of a much bigger story. Go for it. God bless you.
03/02/08
Vivid descriptions in this enjoyable piece. Keep writing.