The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Very good--I really, really wish that you had used your full 750 words and expanded on this, perhaps with dialogue, paragraphs, a more fully detailed setting. You have fine writing skills.
Wonderful devotional. Great example.
02/29/08
Wow! This one reads like a dramatic skit.
02/29/08
Powerful. I would love to see this expanded.
03/02/08
Beautiful story. I want to know more about this event and this character. Keep writing.