The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job with the "druggie" lingo.

I didn't understand why Spence would have taken this delivery job, even for a friend, as he was committing a felony. And the druggie's actions once Spence reveals his motivations seem not true to character. A good idea, though, and quite good for this topic.
While this is a good example of the topic (Bo seeing his son's life and friends) I almost missed it because Spence was doing something illegal. I like the out-of-the-ordinary setting.