The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/08
Very good--the best I've read so far for being right on topic. Reminds me of the song we used to sing: "For your Father up above, is looking down in love, so be careful little hands, what you do."
02/08/08
Super job! I like that it shows teens there are consequences to go with their actions.
02/09/08
Excellent job and right on target with the proverb.
02/13/08
Good story, unfortunately very true to life. One teen was not dependable and the other had peer pressure problem. Good job.